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look.
look into these eyes of blue.
can't you see this love,
burning for you?
look.
look at this broken heart.
cant you see this pain,
from us falling apart?
look.
look at this fallen smile.
can't you see this hurt,
from not being held in awhile?
look.
look into these teary eyes.
can't you see I'm done,
and sick of all the lies?
look.
look at me before you.
dont you understand,
i'm tired of being blue?
look into these eyes of blue.
can't you see this love,
burning for you?
look.
look at this broken heart.
cant you see this pain,
from us falling apart?
look.
look at this fallen smile.
can't you see this hurt,
from not being held in awhile?
look.
look into these teary eyes.
can't you see I'm done,
and sick of all the lies?
look.
look at me before you.
dont you understand,
i'm tired of being blue?
something i wrote today.. not much else i can say
© 2006 - 2024 lostsoul1989
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I like how the description rhymed too....
but as for the poem,
I hope this wasn't a way that you feel!!! it is absolutely beautiful though! I love it....I dont wanna be blue either!
but as for the poem,
I hope this wasn't a way that you feel!!! it is absolutely beautiful though! I love it....I dont wanna be blue either!