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One night, one time,
No strings attached.
One night, all alone,
Not thinking of what will happen next.
One night.

Oh, how one quickly one night can be forever.

All alone, raising a child,
A beautiful girl.
Wondering.
Wondering why she has no father.
All alone.

One night, one time
No strings attached.
One night, all alone,
Thinking of what will happen next.
Slowly she leaves the room,
Not making the same mistake.
One night…
i don't know why i wrote this. it is one my sister and i started awhile ago. it was supposed to be about abortion but i decided to go a different direction. hope y'all like!
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Gaelwyn Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005  Student
Wonderful message in this... Regret.... and hope..
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005   Writer
thankyou.. and i couldn't have said it better myself..
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:icongaelwyn:
Gaelwyn Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005  Student
Your poetry is so wonderful! :hug:
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005   Writer
awwwwwwwwwwwwe! thankyou so much!! it means so much to meh :hug:
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:icongaelwyn:
Gaelwyn Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005  Student
Mweh. You are teh r0xx0rZ. :glomp:
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2005   Writer
lmao.. we both rock! will that work? lol :D :D :glomp: :D :D
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:icongaelwyn:
Gaelwyn Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2005  Student
Sure! :glomp: :D
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2005   Writer
:D :glomp: :D
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Hitotsuboshi Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2005
It does make you think. I often wish people thought more in the first place. ^^; Still, it's not right to judge. The one thing that every single person in the world has in common in personality is that we all make mistakes! :nod: Everybody makes different ones, but that's because everybody needs to learn different things.... :shrug:

So does the child you're talking about have a father who sticks around? Is that what you mean? I hope so....
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2005   Writer
so do i.. so do i.. but ur right it isn't fair to judge.

sadly she is divorced with the childs father but cameron (the kid) is so sweet. actually she is dating my cousin.. i am hoping to see them get married bc cameron loves my cousin so much, they make the perfect family. so it was a happy ending with her
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