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I heard about you,
from one of my friends.
And at that moment,
i knew i loved you.

We didn't meet for awhile,
when we did it wasn't long before love kindled.
when your lips touched mine,
for the first time,
i knew i loved you.

staying just friends,
all my feelings trapped inside.
then you were no more,
but even still i loved you.

you were there in memory whilst i was in anothers arms,
you were there in memory as i held that knife,
you were gone but i still loved you.

as my dreams of us were slowly dying,
i was still trying to be with you.
finally you came back,
seeing that i still loved you.

you said it wouldn't work,
i should have listened.
i was trapped inside a wonderful dream,
slowly creeping into a nightmare.
all the while i still loved you.

if i could go back, i would.
i wouldn't have dialed that number.
that number that made me cry.
you broke my heart,
through the pain i still loved you.

i die inside when i see your face.
i die inside when i hear your voice.
i die inside knowing that we will never be.
all the while i still love you.
i am not really proud of it at the moment. i hope to finalize everything soon.

*background*
she falls in love with this guy before she even met him face to face. hard to believe but its true. they start dating but he breaks it off. they stay friends for awhile. and then he leaves. 5 long months pass and she tries to contact him. during these 5 months she is in another serious relationship in which she ends up thinking about him. one night she tries to commit suicide. thinking of him and how sad she would be if she never saw his face again she keeps on going. when she does start talking to him again things start out weird. she loves him but he doesn't love her. finally they start dating, but things just wern't working out and everything goes spiraling downhill. her love is still there. all he has to do is open his eyes.
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Gaelwyn Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005  Student
:hug: This was lovely... your poetry is so wistful and sad and beautiful all at once.... Srry I haven't watched or commented on your poems, but I will now... most definetely....
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005   Writer
awwwwwe.. thankyou so much!! :hug: your comment is so wonderful!! and thankyou again!!
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Gaelwyn Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005  Student
:hug: What's wonderful is the art you create with words. :nod:
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2005   Writer
why thankyou. you are so nice!! :hug:
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Hitotsuboshi Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2005
:tears: I've been there before, kind of.... I've never actually been in a really serious relationship, but I sure know the feeling of unrequited love.... Again, very lovely, lostsoul1989.
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2005   Writer
thankyou very much Hitotsuboshi! :hug:
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Hitotsuboshi Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2005
You're very welcome! And, um, if Hitotsuboshi is too confusing or long or whatever for you to type, you call me Shi or Shi-chan or something. I know my full deviant name is kinda long (like just about everything else I do). :D
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2005   Writer
it was kinda confusing to type so i'll call ya Shi.. i hope i'll remember that lol :D
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Hitotsuboshi Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2005
That's fine with me! :dance:
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2005   Writer
cool-ness.. Shi.. whaaaaaaa hooooooooo! i remembered it.. lol :D
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Hitotsuboshi Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2005
:giggle: I like that nickname. :D
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2005   Writer
cool-ness.. hi shi!!! :D :D :D
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2005   Writer
omfg!!!!! i am sooooooooooo jealous of u!!!! i wish i could!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can barely do acustic!!!!! sooooooooooo jealous! making u fly to u.s. and teach me now!!!! lol :D
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Tidlz Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2005
omg,,, so beautiful and sad,,,, thats so nice,,, nearly made me cry,,, man,,,,, so koool,,,, do u write song lyrics,,, which are poems with music around em,,,,,, cause i can neva write them,,, i can only write the music,,,,, if their was a song like that poem,,,,, would be so kooool ^_^
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Tidlz Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2005
never heard of em,,, rascal flats,, i dun like country music,, im a punk rock heavy metal fan,,,,, u play guitar,, awsumness,, i luv the guitar,, me and me elektric one,,, lol,,, though their gooood lyrics
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Tidlz Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2005
ohhhh oh we will,,, i play me elektric and accoustic,, i can also play bass, drums, keyboard @_@
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Tidlz Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2005
lol,,, i unno if its a double post,,, @_@,,,, as 4 the musical crap,,, yeh,,, me fwendz jeleous of me,, though she is a mad ass singer,,, we normally play songs,,, i would fly ova if me had da money
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Tidlz Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2005
OHHHH U CAN SING,, AWSUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM,, me jeleous of your singinjg now
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2005   Writer
whoa!! i didn't say i was good tho.. technically everybody can sing,, i just think i can sing.. i say that God gave me this voice so now im gonna make him and everybody hear it.. if they dun like it thats why God gave us earplugs.. lol
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2005   Writer
yeah. that would be awsome tho.. for u to fly ova!! too bad u can't... and i doubt i could either.. i try and sing.. but i dunno.. i dun think i can tho my half sis and her bf say im really good.. i dunno.. i guess i'm my biggest critic.... still wish i had ur talent..
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2005   Writer
omfg!!!!! i am sooooooooooo jealous of u!!!! i wish i could!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can barely do acustic!!!!! sooooooooooo jealous! making u fly to u.s. and teach me now!!!! lol

uh.. if this is a double post slap me. bc i thought i did this yesterday and its not showing up.. basically i put it in the wrong box.. :D
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2005   Writer
yeah. thanks, i am really diverse as far as music goes.. i listen to anything... right now i am listening to dracula by Rob Zombie.. yeah i sorta go from one extreme to another lol :D i play the acustic guitar.. tho i would like to get an electric and bass one day.. dunno tho. maybe we could write a song sometime :)
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2005   Writer
awwwe.. i didn't mean to make you cry!! if it helps i cried alot during that relationship. oh well life goes on. nah. i have never tried to seriously write a song. like i make up my own all the time but none that are ever worth writing down. and i know what u mean bout making the music bc i love playing my guitar and making up my own songs. have you ever heard of rascal flatts?? its a country band bc they have alot of songs like that.

i was born the day u kissed me
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2005   Writer
tell me its not just me

songs like that.

i hate lap tops my hand accedentally hit the super sensitive mouse and it sent too soon.. lol
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2005
aww so beautiful
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2005   Writer
thankyou so much. glad u like it :hug:
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2005
:hug: your welcome
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lostsoul1989 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2005   Writer
:) :hug:
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